Modifications

The only modification I needed to make from my focus group feedback was that I needed to change the positioning of Snapthat's slogan as it sits in advertisements; This is the advertisement currently, however, I agree with the feedback and want to change the slogan too, so that the triangle seems more consistant. Changing the slogan and then adding it to a mock Instagram advert gives the advert a new edge which makes the brand seem really consistent.

I am glad someone pointed out the change because otherwise, it would have gone unnoticed and would not have looked as good as it does now. No other changes were suggested to me during my focus group that I would like to take on and use, nor do I feel like there is anything I want to change that this point. I am happy with both of the advertisements I have created now, with the mock bus ad I have proposed to be used for Uni buses. 

I think that the adverts together look really consistent, my only criticism would be that the triangle would not fit around the text of Snapthat on the bus, however, I think it is still a strong advert that looks consistent with the Instagram advert.